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Shedders: Chapter One by VagabondMike Shedders: Chapter One by VagabondMike

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It finally begins, after three month's work! For some time, I didn't think I'd be able to make it happen, and this is definitely more than a stone's throw from what the first concept was. I hope you all enjoy it! I mentioned a weekly schedule, with a chapter each Friday, but don't be surprised if I'm unable to make a deadline.

I'd like plenty of feedback, because this is definitely written in a different style than Karal'e. I tried to do so, to depart from the fan fiction scene. This doesn't mean I've given up on Karal'e. I just need a break to work on this original story, which I hope you'll like as well!
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arico-samaa Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The PDF wouldn't download... says the page does not exist(((((
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VagabondMike Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Writer
I don't allow PDF downloads because I'm worried that would make it easier for people to plagiarize my work. Is there a different reason you want to download it?
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arico-samaa Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Um... to read it. It doesn't appear on the screen, suggesing that I load PDF instead.
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VagabondMike Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Writer
Oh. That's odd. Hold on, I'll try to fix that.
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VagabondMike Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Writer
There. I've enabled downloads. I don't know why it won't show up on the page, though.
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arico-samaa Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, thanks))
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falloutmind Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Pretty good though i would add some more imagery to make it more obvious in the differences between the Humans, Canines, and Felines later if you show any of them. Brovo and i hope to see more
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VagabondMike Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student Writer
It's definitely something I need to improve on, in general. Thanks!
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falloutmind Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013
yea well i just noticed because as my schools writers club would see i am the king of imagery. They tell a joke about how when a normal person says 'hey that walls white' i say 'i see before me a wall of egg shell white in such a depth that it reflects the blank slate of our humanity before us'
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